Every time your name appears on my computer, I practically salivate. LOL I love your stories! I loved how you started this story. "The first time House awakens after the deep brain stimulation, he doesn’t want to open his eyes". The reader is immediately hooked.
This line killed me "He remembers sitting in that unyielding chair, his head bolted immobile, trying desperately to shift his eyes to the right". I've watched that scene 100 times but seeing it in words was wonderful. Such a great description.
Loved this line as well "He couldn’t die, not until he’d given Amber back to Wilson". You know he wanted that to be the case. How sad.
This line drove me crazy He’s sorry now that, this first time awake, he’s closed his eyes again, because the only picture in his mind as he’s pulled back into the sedation are Wilson’s eyes...". Phew!
So many great lines "He returns to his unnatural, medicinal sleep, gratefully feeling the hum of their connection just beneath his skin."
The whole part about him seizing and Wilson walking off and not coming back was so sad. This was so sad "a physical sensation of something that’s there, and then it’s not." Such a great title. So appropriate. Great job! :D
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Date: 2008-11-13 09:32 pm (UTC)This line killed me "He remembers sitting in that unyielding chair, his head bolted immobile, trying desperately to shift his eyes to the right". I've watched that scene 100 times but seeing it in words was wonderful. Such a great description.
Loved this line as well "He couldn’t die, not until he’d given Amber back to Wilson". You know he wanted that to be the case. How sad.
This line drove me crazy He’s sorry now that, this first time awake, he’s closed his eyes again, because the only picture in his mind as he’s pulled back into the sedation are Wilson’s eyes...". Phew!
So many great lines "He returns to his unnatural, medicinal sleep, gratefully feeling the hum of their connection just beneath his skin."
The whole part about him seizing and Wilson walking off and not coming back was so sad. This was so sad "a physical sensation of something that’s there, and then it’s not." Such a great title. So appropriate. Great job! :D